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Gökdeniz's avatar

i love how the poem builds itself with each repetition and then actually shatters with its own metaphor. i loved the imagery and espcially the ending!! would definitely like to read some more poems from you!

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really beautiful and a great exploration of mortality :) i love your writing this is awesome

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